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Half Moon (self.poetry)
submitted 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) by snakesnakewhale to c/poetry
 

Federico Garcia Lorca, 1922

The moon goes over the water.
How tranquil the sky is!
She goes scything slowly
the old shimmer from the river;
meanwhile a young frog
takes her for a little mirror.

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[–] goat 1 points 1 year ago (1 children)

Oh not asking you to edit, just your experience as a reader is all

[–] snakesnakewhale 1 points 1 year ago

Sure, lay it on me!