Bello Bear

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Hello, I’m Bello :) I’m a character in a comic strip and other media. Please follow for new comics Monday, Wednesday, Friday and other fun stuff!

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Bello Bear 4 April 2025 “Music on Drugs” [OC] - If you like, please share with one friend or family member to help Bello Bear grow! (sh.itjust.works)

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[–] [email protected] 3 points 1 month ago* (last edited 1 month ago) (1 children)

Some friendly feedback: the transition from the 2nd to 3rd panel seems a bit unnatural.

In the 2nd panel the police cat is rather sceptical about the whole discussion, while in the 3rd panel he straight away gives a very honest opinion.

I have minimal knowledge of comics, found your OC by browsing by new when I was bored (I did subscribe and check out the earlier comic releases; thanks for the OC!). These are just my thoughts.

[–] MrSebSin 3 points 1 month ago

Thanks for the feedback and for subbing! Still honing my craft and yeah, I can see that for sure.