Small nitpick, but would it be funnier if it was the other way around? (Cheetah running from its feelings)
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I think I'd add a panel before 1 and show it running from far away and remove what is currently the 4th panel entirely. I get that it's a different joke, but I think it's funnier. OR, if you're going to make the existing joke, don't have the antelope say it, add something nondescript labeled "your feelings" chasing it and make the cheetah's eyes bulging only in the last panel.
I'd make the font larger because they're shouting it from far away
Since we're nitpicking, I'm not a fan of the googly eyes. At least if you're going to do that, maybe shape them a tad bit more like their natural eyes. That way it's less distracting, altho yes-- I get the idea that they're "anxious animals."
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