I think I understand what you're going for, buuuuut...
A) ftl != Time travel. My understanding is a result of a quirk of our current equations being pushed past their usefulness (no one's "fixed them" because no one's found a reason to; no one's seen evidence for anything that travels ftl). Logically speaking, if light takes 8min to reach Earth from the Sun, it should take 4min for a ship moving at 2c to make the same trip. As such, travelling faster than light shouldn't actually send you back in time.
B) you need to work on the phrasing a bit. The first sentence is confusing.