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I really like this take on the prompt! The whole time I thought it was some futuristic sci Fi world where humans relied on technology too much (despite the now obvious hints). Loved the fact that Josh's speech shattered my perception of the world as it reveals exactly who the protagonist is. Especially loved how Kevin's internal thoughts consume the story, you did an excellent job showing the world through his perspective of things!