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I toured the future of birth. (substack.com)

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Would love any and all critique.

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[–] [email protected] 8 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Also oh god is this company is probably patenting their genes so what happens when people have babies do they have to pay a licensing fee?

[–] [email protected] 3 points 1 day ago

I actually considered writing about this! Since similar issues arise in agriculture.

My first idea was that they make the kids infertile from birth and they have to have it unlocked again.

But I decided not to write about it as at this point I was writing about a new company.