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Yeah, but the outside layer of that doll made no sense. The vast majority of the narrative was meant to be related in the words of some random guy running a diner that the two “main characters” walked into.
The whole bargain-bin Van Helsing narrative is supposedly told to them by this diner guy for what I have to assume must have been HOURS, without them interjecting once. And this guy knew every tiny detail of what happened a hundred years ago, right down to the contents of those peoples’ pantries.
The longer it went on, the madder I got.
I totally agree that some parts could be shorter. Also the whole "dive-in narration" cut the initial story for so long, you basically forget the two first characters at some point.