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I love the wealth of ideas that you weave so densely into the text here! The primordial imagery is really focused and excellent. "curls and divergences ... disfiguring fjords and highland ... separating archipelagos ... lamentations ..." is an especially fantastic run. From humble origins to overwhelming hegemony, I sense that our frontal lobes have not evolved in step with humanity's expansion. What a pity that we long for authenticity that is perhaps not quite accessible to us! Thank you for sharing!