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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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I wanted to ask
If you’re okay
But I felt like I already knew the answer

I should have asked if you were okay
But I was afraid I already knew

And I didn’t want to know
What I knew
I didn’t want to know

And my mind went
To all of our favourite places
To us holding hands forever
Through all of our days
Through all of our seasons

To you making tea for me when I couldn’t do it
To the laughing and knowing
And the shouting and crying
We swore we would talk it out in the morning
But morning never came

I should have asked why
You texted me that night
I hadn’t expected your voice
At three in the morning
And I was tired
I tried to keep you waiting
Like all of the times you waited for me
Until deep in the morning

But you couldn’t wait
You never could wait, and now I’ll die waiting
For days that never will come
For you
Only for you

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