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Started this when I read a short story by Borges where I loved the line, 'he was seeking a soul worthy of taking its place in the universe'. Now this poem does not build upon any of the ideas of said story but borrows a beautiful line which I'll credit both Borges and the translator (I forgot who) for.

This is one of my few direct and simple to digest poems. Hope y'all like it.

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[–] [email protected] 4 points 2 weeks ago (1 children)

It's beautiful. :)

I love how you describe action in order for the reader to infer the emotion themselves. I know that's not revolutionary, but I never recognized it this clearly. I will definitely experiment with that.

Thank you for that insight.

[–] [email protected] 3 points 2 weeks ago

Thank you. I would love to read your work too so please do post anything you're comfortable posting here!