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[OC] Texarkana (self.poetry)
submitted 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) by snakesnakewhale to c/poetry
 

by me, 2023

Because of the flatulence
of a paper mill nearby,
the wind is tinged with farts.

Plus old plumbing
a drainage bag,
and holidays have an inoffensive,
human waft of anus
like a perfume trail
in every room.

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[–] snakesnakewhale 1 points 1 year ago

WIP, criticism welcome! I'd like to knock this into some kind of shape